Talk:Among Them Novel/@comment-43875865-20191205191502

a good start. however, spelling could use a very slight improvement and punctuation is a concern of mine. if you'd like, I could give it a brief markup, though I'd like to point out that, for a starting novelist, this is very good.

all in all, keep the writing as is, but add in some spellchecking and maybe add in some puncuation. I am dislexic myself, so I understand how hard it can be to write. I also type faster than I'd like, as I often end up deleting wonderfully crafted sentences to add in the correct spelling and proper descriptions.

also, you would be surprised how many times using point blank language is effective.