Talk:Chapter 1: The Calm Before/@comment-43875865-20200106205231

okay, this is great. besides some minor typos (I hope you're okay with this, by the way. tell me if I'm stepping on toes) this is a lot better than most writers ever manage.

if I may, did you just come up with this? or is this how you write? I don't meant what that sounds like, I just mean that it's a quaint, familiar setting that I'm going to assume evolves quickly. besides, I can see the gears turning with Mary becoming sick and all. have you thought about contaminents from the storm affecting the water, or do you have most of it thought out already?

and as well, I can't decide if you're American or British, you write almost like a combonation of the two. from what I can tell, of course.